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6/7/2013 5 Comments

Who are you going to call when you get yourself in a really bad predicament?

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STORYTELLERS HAVE BEEN getting themselves in and out of tight spots ever since the first tales were narrated. Chester Gould, who originated the Dick Tracy series of comics, was a master of the craft. No cartoon character was better known for getting into situations that seemed impossible to escape. Indeed, Gould once admitted that he outdid himself on one occasion. Tracy was trapped at the bottom of a deep pit and the bad guys dropped a boulder on him that fit the diameter of the pit like a cannon ball fit a muzzle. Gould used a side story of Tracy's partner, Sam Catchem, to fill the comic's panels for more than a week while he pondered how to extricate Tracy from the pit. He almost went so far as to illustrate a pencil eraser appearing to eliminate the danger. I've gotten myself into a similar predicament.
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My current project, a novel entitled Behind Every Mountain, is a story that takes place during the Korean War. It's not about Korea or the war. This novel traces the coming of age of a young man who joins the Army to escape an abusive father and is thrown into a flight for his life. Yes, that's flight, not fight. As an Army Ranger, he is parachuted with a reconnaissance patrol onto the flood plain of the Yalu River separating North Korea and China. Their mission is to observe the Chinese Communist forces massing there and estimate their strength and intent. Unfortunately, they arrive just as the Chicom army is crossing the Yalu and my hero is the lone survivor. (No pun intended, but he is the lone surviving Ranger.)

Cut off from the planned extraction point, he is forced to follow the Chicom army south as it drives the UN allies ahead of it while he looks for an opportunity to sneak past the enemy and rejoin any American unit. Obviously, he encounters many dangers during this adventure, but none so daunting as when he comes abreast of the North Korean capital, Pyongyang. There he must cross the Taedong River.

Although this is a work of fiction, I attempt to remain true to the history, geology, culture, and time of the milieu in which this story occurs. I studied Korea and its history as far back as the arrival of the first Chinese outcasts who escaped there to hide in the mountains that dominate the peninsula. These same mountains provide my hero with cover and concealment as he travels parallel to the Chicom soldiers. However, crossing the Taedong River without revealing himself is another matter.
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The Taedong River is more than a quarter mile wide at the point where the young Ranger must cross, as seen in this aerial photo. The dam that appears in it did not exist at the time of the Korean War. It is reasonable to assume that all bridges were heavily used by the Chicom army and well-guarded. Because the UN air force and naval aviators dominated the skies, the communists moved at night. My hero also would have moved at night when crossing dangerous areas like the river.

This photo also reveals that the river above the damn is covered in ice, while below the dam it is not. I have not yet been able to ascertain whether it was ice-covered during the winter of 1950 or if the ice was thick enough to bear the weight of a man walking across. I may have to make an assumption about that for the purposes of my story. Fortunately, I have my training as an infantry officer to fall back on when making assumptions about the conduct of war.
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However, I know that with absolute certainty that the moon was full at the time of his attempted crossing, December 27, 1950, thus adding another layer of difficulty. It is reasonable to assume that the communists would have positioned observers along the river's edge, probably on both sides. They must have known that remnants of the American army were attempting to straggle back south after the Chicom army surprised and routed them in November of that year. I used the Moon Phase Calendar when writing Rebels on the Mountain to determine how difficult it must have been for Fidel Castro to sneak past Mexican authorities as he set out from the Tuxpam River on his fateful trip to Cuba to launch his revolution.

Obviously, my fictional Ranger ultimately will cross the Taedong River safely. But, how? That is the question. You'll just have to wait for the novel later this year to find out.
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Larry Winebrenner link
6/7/2013 07:12:35 pm

If this new book is as well drawn and exciting as Rebels on the Mountain, it will be a real winner. I eagerly await the completion of the novel.

Suggestion for crossing the river---cross the entire quarter mile swimming underwater. Wait. That won't work. He'll have to come up for air. :)

Seriously, you might explore weather conditions, cloud cover, etc. Also, a fortuitous air raid might cause a distraction.

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Jack Durish
6/8/2013 07:18:02 am

I knew I shouldn't have made this posting. Now people are going to feel compelled to make suggestions and take credit if I use one. Yes, I was going to have him hold his breath and swim a quarter mile under freezing water.

Actually, I did that once...

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Kapena Nemo link
6/12/2013 06:51:44 am

Jack,

I think you may have dug yourself into a hole which Gould would never have had a problem with.

Fiction vs. Fact.

In fiction you can do anything you want with the "real world" go back to the suspension of disbelief concept.

If you do a good writing job the reader won't fault you for making science suit your needs.

"It was an extremely cold period and that night it was almost beyond his ability to survive. If he was going to go, now was the time, and he'd have to rely on the ice being strong enough to take his weight as he eluded the Commie Chink guards on the dam.

He knew from his experience as an kid when he'd ice skated back on the Gunpowder river north of Baltimore that any ice accumulation would be thickest nearest the face of the dam. So, while it would give him a way across the 400 yards of jumbled ice, he would have to be directly under the area of surveillance the guards on the dam would be watching.

Looking out on the river's white surface, he realized that his dark camouflage would stand out like a house fly on a sheet of typing paper. But there was no help for that.

As a hunter, he was aware that the eye is constructed to pick up and focus on movement especially quick movements. So, he needed to cross the white river's surface, but he needed to do it without catching a guard's attention and earning himself an unannounced .765mm Chinese Mauser round, or a shouted challenge for his trouble.

Slow, steady and control the uncontrollable shivers that racked his body. He started slipping and sliding as quietly as possible across the ice which alternated between smooth and treacherous and jumbled and tumbled which cracked and groaned under his weight."

My recommendation, write it the way you want to, and let the reader figure out whether they like it enough to go the whole way with you, or go off fact checking you. Its your book, your character, and your world.

Thanks,

Nemo.

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Jack Durish
6/12/2013 11:01:48 am

You are correct. Gould wouldn't have a problem with this scenario and neither would you. Unfortunately, you missed the fact that the dam didn't exist at the time of the Korean War. Other than that, some interesting suggestions. Forgive me, but I'm going another way and it won't depend on deus ex machina.

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Kapena Nemo link
6/13/2013 06:51:47 am

Isn't the question how to deal with the problem, not the existence of the dam then or now? My scenario chose to put the damned dam there.
I was actually thinking about Pierce Broslin's James Bond as I wrote that blurb.

Thanks,
Nemo


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